Friday 12 October 2012

Sudden Prose Reprints: Lorna Thorpe's "Eclipse"



Eclipse

At the eleventh minute of the eleventh hour on the eleventh day of the eighth months of the final year of the millennium, darkness fell.  And they left their homes and their places of work to congregate on the beaches and the sea and on the hillsides surrounding the city.  And for those two minutes the roads were still and business all along the south coast was suspended, even in advertising they left their Powerpoint pitches to gaze up at the wondrous spectacle.  But there was much disappointment throughout the land.  Because in the place where there was totality the sky was thick with clouds and in the place where the sun shone there was a partial eclipse, which meant only a very few saw Bailey’s beads and the corona and diamond ring, talk of which had excited many before the event.  On the beach at Brighton were gathered a multitude with their pinhole cameras and special glasses and they experienced not complete darkness but a strange and eerie light, the like of which they had never known.  It was cold.  A hush fell over the crowd as the sky darkened.  Even the mobile phone ringtones were silent.  Even the birds were still and then, as the sun moved from behind the moon, the pigeons and herring gulls burst forth in song, they circled over the Miss Haversham skeleton of the West Pier and dove through the broken windows of its concert hall.  And the crowds left the beach slowly for they had been moved by nature’s display and were reluctant to return to their keyboards and faxes, their to-do lists.  Even though they had set their videos and knew they would get a better view on TV.





Today's selection comes from Lorna Thorpe's second collection, Sweet Torture of Breathing (Arc, 2011). Thorpe was born in Brighton, where she lived for most of her life before moving to Cornwall in 2011. She has worked as a tour operator, social worker and barmaid. Her first pamphlet, Dancing to Motown (Pighog, 2005), was a Poetry book Society pamphlet choice, and her first full collection, A Ghost in My House, was published by Arc in 2008. Thorpe presently works as a freelance writer and has published features in The GuardianYou can learn more about Thorpe and her work on her blog.

2 comments:

Tessa Hewitt said...

"Eclipse" is a successful prose poem as it focuses on one particular moment that the people in the prose poem gather for. The opening sentence has a brilliant rhythm that also gives it a faster pace, to show the excitement at the possibility of seeing an eclipse. The point when there is "not complete darkness but a strange and eerie light," is as if time has become suspended in that moment. This is finally broken by the wonderfully poetic line, "the pigeons and herring gulls burst forth in song."

Anonymous said...

I think the imagery works in this piece because it's accessable to the reader, the author is able to communicate a lot of meaning through things we are familiar with, such as the powerpoint pitches being left to gaze at the wondrous spectacle. We take this as a symbol for a certain aspect of life that is left, suddenly unimportant when people are witness to the eclipse, a symbol for higher fullfilment perhaps. There is a beat evident in the prose, my favourite rythmic sentence is 'On the beach at Brighton were gathered a multitude with their pinhole cameras and special glasses and they experienced not complete darkness but a strange and eerie light, the like of which they had never known', the syllables dance off the tongue. The audience to the event are taken on a journey in these moments, they don't just witness it but are changed by it. They are reluctant to go back to their keyboards and faxes, an aspect of life that now they feel is meaningless after experiencing something more. The characters perceptions being challenged is one reason this piece works, the people are not simply there, they are affected.